Ah! Why is there a scorpion in the sink?

We are learning to develop thinking skills through poetry.
I know this when I write a poem about a scorpion in the sink.

Why did you swallow my friend?

Mick grabs a gun out of his pocket and shoots the slime but it was too late. The slime had already swallowed him up. Some of crew 44 wasn't going to let that happen so they came up with a plan. They fed the Slime their clothes and weapons. After a while, Mick popped out from the other end of the mouth. The Slime then blew up because one of the weapons was a grenade.

WALT develop critical thinking skills using De Bono's green thinking hat.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I write a creative alternative ending for the story that I have read.