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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 17 November 2015

Bakark, I'm a hen!

Procedure for making a hen
What you will need:
  • Paper plate
  • some thin card some
  • colored paper
  • felt pens black,brown or orange paint
  • a paintbrush
  • glue
  • scissors
  • a stapler

  1. Paint the paper plate with brown, orange, or black paint. After you have painted the place, put it somewhere cool to dry.
  2. Take some thin cards and cut out the beak for your hungry hen.
  3. Colour the hen’s beak with felt, pens or paint.
  4. Cut out a comb for your hen and colour it red.
  5. Fold the paper in half so the paint is on the outside of the plate at the top of the fold.
  6. Staple the hen's comb above the beak along the fold of the plate.
  7. Now paint or draw eyes for your hen and tape or staple it on your hen.
  8. Cut out some coloured feathers using coloured paper.
  9. Tape or glue on some feathers on both sides of your hen.
  10. Use longer feathers for your hen's tail.
  11. Cut some grains of wheat out of yellow paper or give your hen some real wheat.
  12. Give your hen a push and watch your amazing hen rock forward to eat the wheat.

We are learning to write a procedure.
I know this when I rewrite the procedure of making a hen in my own words

Monday, 16 November 2015

Yay! I get a free day at the Cinemas!

We are learning to write a description
 I can do this when I write a brainstorm and a script to describe the 2015 Manaiakalani film festival. 

Transcript:
 On the 11th of November 2015, Glen Innes school, Glenbrae school, Panmure bridge and my school St Patrick's School went on individual bus to travel to Manaiakalani film festival. It was held at the one of the biggest malls in Auckland called Sylvia Park. We have this film festival once a year because we are part of the Manaiakalani cluster. Each class had to make a three minute movie and then it is presented to the other Manaiakalani schools on the big screen.

Wednesday, 23 September 2015

I am good at pretending to be a mannequin!

On Saturday 19th of September my family except for my mum went to Sylvia Park to buy uncle a suit for the St Peter's ball.

When we arrived at Sylvia park, we went to Hallestein Brothers to look for a suit. While we were at Hallestein I looked for hats. When I was there, I wondered if I should do a public prank. I thought about it and then I decided that i'm going  to follow through with the prank.

First I stood like a mannequin and then I waited for people to come past me. When people came past, I waited for them to look at me for a little while before I jump out at them as fast as I could then I watch their reaction. I scared about 20 people. After that we went to the food court for lunch.

At the food court my uncle and I went searching for something to eat. My uncle said, "let's go to the fish and chips shop. When we got to the fish and chips shop, my uncle ordered a John burger and I ordered a little John burger. Then we went home.

I had a fun time and I hope the people that I scared forgives me for scaring them.

We are learning to understand and use descriptive language in our writing. 
I know this when I use appropriate verbs and adjectives in my writing.

Wednesday, 16 September 2015

What is your best soccer move?

On Friday 4th of September my favourite cousin came over for a sleep over again.

The first thing we did when he entered the house was played indoor soccer. I did the best soccer move ever in my life.I kicked the ball over my head from behind me then kicked it to the goal Bruce lee style. After that incredible maneuver my cousin got angry and went upstairs to play games instead.

Upstairs in my room was my cousin playing Minecraft. Minecraft is a game where you build and explore. You can also fight online gamer's and kill Zombies, Spiders, Skeletons and also a big blop of slime. My cousin was playing with Jacob, my friend from America. After that long game we went to watch a movie called Straight outta Compton.

Straight outta Compton is a very bad movie, it has foul language and inappropriate scenes. The movie was based on trues story about a crew called N.W.A. N.W.A was a famous rap crew in the 1980's. They were known as the most dangerous group. When the movie was over we all fell asleep like angels.

After all that madness everybody had a great time. Next time I should not show off my soccer skills too much so my cousin does not feel intimidated.

We are learning to use descriptive languages in our writing
I know this when I use appropriate verbs and adjectives

Sunday, 23 August 2015

I miss my family overseas. Do you have any families overseas?

On the 5th of August my family auntie and I went to Tonga for two unveilngs.

On the plane, I watched a show called Good Luck Charlie. Good Luck Charlie is about a girl named Teddy Dunkin who makes video diaries for her younger sister to watch when she is older. At the end of the video diary, Teddy says her phrase, "Good Luck Charlie".

During Good Luck Charlie I felt a headache. My dad said it was air pressure as we were landing. After we arrived we went out of the airport and we went straight to Longoteme because we had to help with the grave stone 

After the grave stone was organised, I went to meet up with some old toko's. ( Toko means brother in Tongan). I met up with a couple of boys at their school and I played Rugby with them. I scored two tries and seven perfect tackles.

After that day, I asked myself, "Did I do a good job, did I work hard enough." I don't think I did. I will try harder next time and I might take some gum with me next time to help release the air pressure in my head when we are landing.

We are learning to write a recount using the correct structure
I know this when I write the introduction,  followed by the events and then the conclusion.

Sunday, 31 May 2015

Did you have a good sleep over?

On Saturday 23rd of May, my cousin was dropped off at my house for a sleep over.

First we went on the computer to play some games. 5 minutes later we got bored so we watched TV. We watched Big Time Rush, Mr Young and icarly. Then my mum left to go to my aunt's house. After that the fun began.

We played indoor soccer and we used a cushion as a soccer ball. We played soccer in the living room. My cousin almost smashed the TV because he kicked the cushion and it went towards the TV like a speeding bullet. Lucky I was being a good goal keeper so I blocked the ball.

Next we moved on to a different activity, boxing. My cousin almost knocked me out because he swung faster than Many Pacquia's fist. However he missed and punched the vase instead. We were lucky that it was not smashed otherwise we would have got in deep trouble.

When my cousin punched the vase, he got scared and said "lets play karate". I kicked him so fast that my foot was like a bullet train. I punched faster than the Karate Kid. However my aim was off and I ended up hurting my cousin because kicking him in the tummy.

After my cousin was hurt we had to stop.  Before long we went on the computer and played a scary game called ask the spirit. I got so scared that I screamed like a 6 year old girl. Then we heard a noise. "Mum is here!", I shouted, so we cleaned up the house faster than Usain Bolt. Then we ran upstairs and played video games until 5 in the morning.

My cousin and I had a great time, I should go to bed early next time and use day time to play games so it doesn't affect my health.

WALT write a recount using the correct structure of a recount. 
I know I can do this when I start with an introduction, followed by the events and then the conclusion.

Tuesday, 19 May 2015

How much do you love your grandpa?

On May 15th was a special day for my grandpa, it was his birthday

First we cleaned the  house to get sparkly clean and to get ready for his birthday. Next my dad and went out hunting for the perfect present. We went to Sylvia Park to buy his present. We found a $200 watch at the jewelry store, so bought it because we knew he loved watches.

While my family was cleaning I was inviting my closes cousins over. After that I went to my room and started practicing my amazing speech. Before my granddad came my mum bought the cake in a click of a finger because we live near the bakery. Then my cousins arrived.

My granddad opens the door the light were off then SURPRISE. We all had to meet him before we eat. When we were about to eat I said a prayer and said my speech. My speech brought tears to his eyes. Then I gave him his new watch, he loved it, he said "a ten dollar watch replaced by a gold $200 watch". Then we ate takeaways my aunty bought. She bought chicken nibbles, fried rice, sweet and sour pork and a chicken salad.

I had an awesome day especially my granddad, he had a wonderful time. Thank you Lord for giving him a long life and keeping him healthy and happy. 

WALT write a recount using the correct structure.
I know this when I can write the topic, followed by the events and then the conclusion.

Wednesday, 13 May 2015

Learn more about the countries of the kiwis!

New Zealand is a country located in the Southern-Western Pacific ocean.

The Maori name for New Zealand is Aotearoa. The official language spoken is Britain English and Te Reo Maori. The Maori people are the Polynesian people of New Zealand. The tallest mountain is Aoraki  mount cook, it is 3,754 meters and 12,316 feet.

The capital city of New Zealand is Wellington and the largest city is Auckland. New Zealands native animal is a Kiwi. New Zealand celebrates a day called Waitangi day. Waitangi is a day of celebration when the Maori treaty was signed.

In 1893 New Zealand became the first country in the world to give all woman the right to vote. Rugby is the most popular sport in NZ.
In New Zealand they drive on the left side of the road. New Zealand is home to the smallest dolphin species.

The amazing kiwi country has been through rough times but now they are improving every year.


WALT understand and use correct structure of a report
I know I can do this when I write the topic sentence, followed by the details and then the conclusion.

Friday, 24 April 2015

Have you ever had a moment when someone annoyed you?

On the 10th of April my amazing dad, uncle, sisters and I went to the movies to watch a movie called Spongebob sponge out of water.

When we arrived at the movies we before going in we had to buy our yummy snacks and and tickets. While we were waiting for the movies to start ready we took photos of us at the Time out zone. After a while we asked the man when we could enter, he said, “Right now.” So we entered.

After we sat down the little kids behind us  were talking very loud! When the movie started, the kids were still really loud. I was so annoyed that I had to block my ears until they stopped talking. Every time there was a funny scene the kids behind were laughing like crazy. I was so annoyed.

After the movie, my family and I were waiting for my dad because my dad went to watch a different movie. He watched Fast and Furious 7. We waited for two hours at the Time out. We spent all our coins on the arcade games. After two hours, my dad came out of the theater.

I had a good time though I was annoyed. I got to eat, drink and play games. Next time I will if I meet them again ask them to keep quiet.


WALT use appropriate descriptive language.
I know I can do this when I use adjectives and adverbs in my writing.

Friday, 27 March 2015

Are you a big fan of Tyler?

Tyler is a young actor who starred in a lot of movies, and TV shows. Like Everybody Hates Chris. Tyler played the main character Chris. He also starred as Truth in the movie Let it Shine. Tyler is also a rapper. He is most recognised for playing the character Chris Rock.

He was born on October 9th 1992. He is 22 at the moment. He has two brothers, Tyrel and Tylen Williams. He was born in Yonkers in New York

Tyler started acting at the age of four years old on little Bill, he voiced Bobby.
Then at the age of fourteen, he starred in everybody hates Chris. He was the youngest person to win an NAACP image award.
He won the youngest artist award for his work on Everybody hates Chris. He was in eight movies and two TV shows. He was raised by his father who is a police sergeant Le’Roy Williams and his mother Angela Williams who is a singer.

Tyler has been through a lot of journeys and has a lot of experience being an actor
WALT write a report using the correct structure.
I know this when I write the topic, followed by the details and then the conclusion in my report.

Monday, 9 March 2015

Try spending more time with your families!

In the holidays, my dad and my sister picked me up from my aunt's house to take me for a family barbeque.


When we arrived at One tree hill, the barbeque wasn't ready so I went to help my dad and his older brother with the cooking. We cooked meat patties, chicken pieces and sausages. I was bad at cooking because I burnt everything so I took my dads phone and watched some videos on YouTube. After that people started to arrive.


I got bored so I gave the phone to my little sister to play with and I went to play cricket with my cousins. I hit the ball so hard that it went flat. After that the food was ready and we ate some.


I ate a burger with a sausage and a patties. It tasted yum so I finished all my food. My cousin and I went off to the trees and played water fight. I got so wet because he had two bottles to attack me with


One tree hill is where we had the barbeque. One tree hill is half mountain with half a farm. At One tree hill we could see sheep's, cows and chickens. One tree hill is a tall mountain.

It was an amazing time at One tree hill I hope it happens again. soon If I get bored next time I should run around some more and then eat another burger.


WALT: plan our writing by focusing on the important information.
I know this when I write the keywords about my holiday using a brainstorm map.

Tuesday, 25 November 2014

Do you want to get wet?

On Sunday my dad asked Patelesio, Lupe and I a big favor. Wash the car. Patelesio was so excited that he took off his T-shirt. First we had to fill a bucket full of water. Then Patelesio poured the bucket all over the car and I got the hose and gave him a big surprise. Patelesio got mad and chased me around the house with a water bottle.

 Then my sister came outside and wanted to join in on the fun so Patelesio squirted the water bottle at her when he was doing that, I gave both of them a big surprise with the hose. I snuck behind them and turned on the hose they said Revenge will be ours and they went around the backyard and filled the big bucket full of water and poured it all over me. I chased them both and trapped them in a corner. I said in a French accent "say hello to my little friend" I grabbed the hose from behind me and sprayed them both. 

After that we went back inside and we all took a long hot shower.
I had a lot of fun with my sister and my cousin, I hope we get to do it again soon.

WALT use the appropriate language features in a recount.
I know I can do this when I write the the introduction, the body and the conclusion in order.  

Thursday, 19 June 2014

Learn how to wash dishes now!

Thing you will need
Gloves
sponge
dishwashing liquid
hot water
dishes
tea towels

What to do
1. Put on some music, there is nothing better than doing housework while listening to good music.
2. Slip on some rubber gloves because it can get messy and because the water is hot.
3. Organise by grouping the plates and bowls and other stuff that needs cleaning altogether.
4.  Fill the sink with hot water.
5. Squirt some dishwashing liquid into the sink.
6. Grab a sponge to scrub and clean the dishes.
7. Take a tea towel to dry all dishes.

One way to make my mum happy is help her wash the dishes properly.

Did my steps of washing dishes help?

WALT use the correct writing structure for procedural writing.

I know this when I write the materials, followed by the instructions on how to wash the dishes.