It is dangerous for people to take pictures on rides
While you are taking a selfie stick photo your phone can be damaged. While you're on a ride, your phone might drop and crack on the floor. Your phone might flung out and hit someone on the head.
It is dangerous on rides. When you reach out to get your phone, you might fall out of the seat. You might hit somebody with the selfie stick.
You damage the ride. While your on the roller coaster, your stick might hit something on the ride. You might hit the person in charge and then he might hit the wrong button.
Low battery. If you need to call someone to pick you up, your phone might be dead because you have wasted the battery taking pictures. There might not be memory space on your phone because you took many pictures.
Selfie stick should be banned from amusement parks because you can damage your phone, it's dangerous on rides, you might damage the ride and your phone might die.
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