Humpty Dumpty was killed by Foxy. WHAT?

Once upon a time there was an egg named Humpty Dummy that lived in scrambled city where all the eggs live in.

One day a bad Fox named Foxy entered Scrambled City. He only went to egg town to rob the houses but while he was robbing his second house he saw Humpty sitting on top of a big brick wall. Foxy could not control himself so he had to push Humpty off the wall, so he did!

After Humpty fell and splattered into pieces Foxy cooked him and turned it to scrambled eggs and shared it with himself because he was also known as the greedy sneaky Fox. After that day the egg FBI were trying to find the the person who killed Humpty dumpty, they traced the egg stains then scanned some hand prints and footprints. The handprints were fox prints so they had to enter Foxburg to ask every fox in the city questions.

While the egg FBI were asking innocent fox’s questions Foxy was telling his best friend Phoebe what he had done, then foxy said “don't tell anyone”. but when the egg FBI came to Phoebe’s house Phoebe was getting nervous and started sweating and scratching and then…. “OK FOXY THAT LIVES DOWN THE STREET DID IT AND TOLD ME NOT TO TELL BUT I'M SCARED, PLEASE DON'T TAKE ME TO JAIL”. Then the FBI said “calm your tail we won't take you to jail you did nothing so i'm just going to take your friend Foxy to jail, now where does he live again”?

When the FBI went to Foxy’s house they smashed the door open and tackled foxy the put him in handcuffs. While they were taking foxy in to the police car egg reporters were trying to interview him, So he turned to a camera and said “I'll return.”

THE END

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Try making your own word find!

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Who wants to go to the movie next week?

On January 15 my dad dropped off my friends, sisters and I to the cinema at Sylvia Park to watch a movie.

When we got to the cinema we had to look for a movie that we would all enjoy. After a long argument about what movie to watch we finally agreed on Oddball. While we were buying the tickets we also bought yummy food like a LARGE Sprite and a LARGE bowl of popcorn. Next we went into the movie theater.

The movie Oddball was about a strange dog that is supposed to look after the hens at the farm but he only protects penguins. Oddball is the name of the dog. In the movie a fox tries to eat the penguin but then oddball scared it away. Oddball would be taken to an island where their are loads of penguins, and all he did in the island was protect the penguins for the whole night.

After the movie my friends and I went to the arcade to play some arcade games. My friend sake and nano played a shooting game which was two players. While they were shooting polices I was racing on a racing car. When I was in first place on the game strangers came by to watch me win. When I was in the middle of the race my friends pushed me off the seat then they started playing.

After that long day everybody had funny even my Nano my friend had fun he never smile that much. Next time my friends take me off the arcade game I will try stand up for myself.

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Look! Its my word find!

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